May 29, 2011
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Nightmares
I seem to have deviated quite far from my plans of sharing most of my poetry on here... So continuing in the order I left off in...
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Nightmares
Good morning night, wake me up
Whisper to me, screams of sleep
Keep me awake and make me think
All of your secrets I solemnly swear to keep
The heavy load, I can feel
Burdening me, chaining me down
Hide me away from my insecurities
Anything from the nights bloodened sound
Darkness swirls, I see the light
Thoughts in a haze, quickly going
Awoken from my deepest fear
The blood from my wrists no longer flowing
Good morning night, welcome me in
Whisper to me, screams in the night
Wake me up, put me back to sleep
My nightmares start to drift out of sight
Comments (3)
This one is haunting , but really good. It tells a lot, but an interesting way of setting it up. My prayer is for you tonight as you say good morning.
@vangelicmonk -
Thank you. I definitely want input on the poems for sure... For they show quite a deep piece of myself.
@devour_my_broken_soul - Thanks for sharing it. Especially as it is personal. Definitely here to lovingly critique, but I'm an amateur poe "try" poet myself. Keep it up. God Bless ya.
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